Caligula's Launderette

here it is...

here it is...

again it seems Brad you have the ability to shine with your vocabulary of fantastical words and ideas. simply put -- WOOHOO...hmm maybe with just a tad less energy...I really ...

I'm glad I found the time to read this. It's very refreshing and like someone said before me 'smacks of Douglas Adams'. if you ever have the time pick up ...

oooo...nothing's better than a good ol betrayel. this really intrigued me...carry on. After I got passed the fact that it's a little hard to read for me do to formatting ...

ALL of them! Just read Deerskin for a second time. Loved it! I love all her stuff I've read. Blue Sword god that brings back memories. Read that and the ...

I swear I critiqued this...oh well I guess I'm just losing my mind again. Here it is then... I really like this phrase "beneath a moon turned the color of ...

very, very interesting...I like it and am intrigued to see what happens, with Bryant, Tasha and the baby. Can I go jump the dad with a tire iron...pretty please...maybe he'll ...

hmmm...I really liked this poem. My favorites lines are these "Apartments are pretty when the sun paints us gold and we spend our days dancing alone" the imagery in this ...

heres my present...I hope it's legible enough. CL

I am really impressed by your poetry, and to show my appreciation here's my present, a proper crit. This was the only poem of yours I found I could do ...

here's my present to you, for sharing such a cool poem. hope its legible enough for you to understand. CL

Thought it was time I got around to giving people proper crits...I think I used the poem before you edited it, so sorry if I repeat something that you already ...

hmm...titled maybe something along the lines of unrequited love. I dunno, I'm not the greatest with titles. but I did do a proper crit, I think it was before you ...

since this was such a great read, I thought I owed a proper crit...I hope its not to hard to read.